Tuesday, June 1, 2010

Introduction to "Your First Time"

"Your first time" was written on May 6 2010, and it turned out to be more of a descriptive, show not tell journal. I thought that when I wrote "The flashing lights were so bright, and the sounds of the machines going crazy was simply spectacular" that I had a strong sense of showing. I grew a lot from writing the first set of journals and by the second go around, they were starting to get a bit harder. I really enjoy going to the casino now and I believe that it is because I had such a great first experience with it.

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